Arrived at 2AM, a nearly 3ft descent, a
safe but hard landing
Snoring too close to the edge
My back is still smarting from the dump.
Snoring too close to the edge
My back is still smarting from the dump.
Arrived at 2AM
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Good morning, crossnote;
Is this a poem? Or did you and your wife travel home by flying?
I'm sorry I'm not getting it.
God bless you, brother.
Is this a poem? Or did you and your wife travel home by flying?
I'm sorry I'm not getting it.
God bless you, brother.
My guess would be that he fell out of bed bobinfaith .
See IAOH spot-on response directly above. #@%#.
Hello crossnote;
I didn't get it at first but from In Awe of Him's post I understand now.
Thank you, brother.
Hey Bob, I realize ex-accountants have a bit of difficulty handling poetry. It's like loose coins rolling all over the place. lol
In Awe of Him got it right away. lol! The thing that threw me off is like the song says,
"We can't even think of a word that rhymes, well" - Alice Cooper
Songwriters: Alice Cooper / Dennis Dunaway / Glen Buxton / Neal A. Smith / Michael O. Bruce
School's Out lyrics © Ezra Music Corp., Pw Ballads, Songs Of Universal Inc.
HAHAHA..... Do I get a prize????
Yes, my priority is to go after the meaning rather than the rhyming, but it's great if you can have both.
No.
1. It was only a guess.
2. It didn't rhyme.
3. You showed no sympathy for my bed-dump. (hehe)
I'm guessing.... just guessing... and then I am confessing
crossnote I'm so sad that a prize I could have had
IF only.... I'd remembered to tell you I felt BAD.
HAHAHAHAHA..... Now can I have a prize???