Please keep in mind that I am 68 and have only performed once in the past year as you read my comments.
it's a very nice piece but it is 2.2 to 2.5 minutes to long for good commercial value. I'm impressed with your fingering and I believe that you can grow into one of the best studio grade musicians. Now the part that might hurt so remember my personal background. The video sorely distracts from the music and the words. Even as long as it is I believe there is a couple of venues you will do well with this number. I would not do this numer in a Prison Ministry but would do it in a church and on stage in a Christian Concert.
Keep working on the fingering, it is very close to what propelled me onto the stage and was always my strong point after my voice.