Yesterday at midnight.

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Yesterday at midnight.

Stayed awake through the night
Wrote this without a source of light.
Sat up pondering upon the questions in my mind
Searching for answers that I couldn't find.

Prayed that He'd show me He's real
Or that when I needed Him He'd be near.
Prayed for a reprise from toothache - that He did not give
Prayed for a heavy rain - that He gave for relief

Though the moment of escape was brief,
It did serve to refine my belief
That when I stop asking,
I may then start to receive.

How that works out, I do not yet know
But you could pray a personal prayer, that He'd show
And then He'd grant you knowledge, and the understanding will flow
Everything will click,but it may be too much at one go - so don't blame me should you radiate a glow.


(ps,it was really done in the middle of the night so I'm sorry if it doesn't seem to make sense..Also I've noticed that the last line's a tad too long,so I'd love it if someone could give me tips on improving this.. thanks :D)
 
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really like this.. it is heart felt.. alwyas know that HE is real, and will come in HIS time, though to us, it might not be when we want..

And I hear you about the toothache, worse than cdhildbirth in my opinion.
 
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Mark_18

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Awww. Praying for your tooth situation.

Loved the poem, that was awesome!

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