Haiku for All

[thenami]

YES! *spiritual hugs*

he says hold my hand
I have made you promises
to never let go

 

[CPerkins]

to never let go
our life filled with God
in Spirit we walk

 

[crossnote]

seventeen pebbles
being carried by the tide
no place to anchor

(Sorry, I missed the 'ongoing' part. My commentary on classical Haiku)

 

[thenami]

(patching it together....)

in spirit we walk
we are joined forever
no place to anchor

 

[CPerkins]

no place to anchor
the world shifting in sand
safety gifted in Rock

cp

 

[crossnote]

no place to anchor
the world shifting in sand
safety gifted in Rock

cp

safety gifted in rock,
no payment could be secured
to redeem Adam

 

[thenami]

to redeem Adam
is something not biblical
it is up to God

 

[CPerkins]

It's up to God
all things within his control
unseen forces do work

 

[thenami]

unseen forces do work
through Jesus Christ our lord
prayer in his name

 

[CPerkins]

prayer in his name
blessed in that we can
praise God always

 

[thenami]

I praise God always
he is my light in this world
so full of darkness

 

[thenami]

so full of darkness
are some people around me
I must shine my light

 

[CPerkins]

I must shine my light
grace overflowing and spilling out
God's grace continues

 

[MatthewG]

Darkness comes following
Through a light shines
As the wind forever blows

 

[MatthewG]

Good God is
Life worth living eternal
Kindness mercy forgiveness grace grows
Always

 

[thenami]

...patching to get back to a haiku...

forgiveness grace grows
always from our spirit
Gods grace continues


Gods grace continues
like a fountain eternal
when we need a drink