Haiku for All

[Marilyn C]

Like never before
We are the New Man in Christ
What amazing grace

 

[Cosia]

1. First line is repeat of the last line above us and has 5 syllables
2. Second line 7 syllables of your own
3. Third line 5 syllables of your own.


What amazing Grace
That not one of us deserve
Thank you Dear Father

 

[crossnote]

He raises me Up
Higher and higher
Like never before

Now I count only 5 syllables, as most haiku follow a 5-7-5 syllable pattern, not 5-5-5.

 

[thenami]

I guess our could be one or two syllables depending on your accent. Ow'er is how I pronounce it, or like hour. Ive used it both ways.
Carry on y'all. No poetry police here. I will patch whatever I can when I post.

thank you dear Father
for these poetry pages
may I serve you well

 

[Yesua888]

so

Now I count only 5 syllables, as most haiku follow a 5-7-5 syllable pattern, not 5-5-5.

"awefully sorry", must have been having one of those "blonde" or "senior" moments

 

[Yesua888]

I guess our could be one or two syllables depending on your accent. Ow'er is how I pronounce it, or like hour. Ive used it both ways.
Carry on y'all. No poetry police here. I will patch whatever I can when I post.

thank you dear Father
for these poetry pages
may I serve you well

Tut Tut, did you also get it wrong : ) : ) : )

 

[Yesua888]

In the Lord We Trust
Growing stronger and stronger
Till we See Him

 

[Marilyn C]

Till we will see Him
Oh glorious appearing
and wondrous rapture